Elizabeth Sparkle blushing shades of petunia, deliberating Matt Doppelganger’s kiss, cantered into Hogglebrush’s murky mist. Playful Mike Butterscotch dislodged her with his Kite. She tumbled toward the sullen swamp, that none should disturb.
Matt Doppelganger, focused on Elizabeth’s sparkle, tripped on a Pixie-Princess practising posing for Ms Pixie-verse. Princess Heather Una-Gobble’s feathers were a-tether. She saw Elizabeth’s peril, pirouetted down the craggy hill. She stopped Elizabeth’s stumble before the perturbed puddle’s wrath.
Matt Doppelganger carried Elizabeth Sparkle like a proper puritan until he hit the hilltop and kissed her again. She faux-slapped him.
‘Stop doing that!’
Read part one: Hogglebrush’s Handsome Hero
Inspired by 1) Fairytale Prompt #28 by the magnificent Anja at mindlovemiserysmenagerie click the picture or above to join in
2) Friday Fictioneers is hosted by the lovely RochelleWiseoff-Fields. Where you write 100 words to the photo prompt to the left. You can link up below or check out the other great stories.
Love the names!
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Thanks Marissa. 🙂
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your playful use of words is deliciously exhilarating.
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Thank you. What a delightful thing to say.
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A fun read.
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Thank you Yarnspinner.
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This is fun!! Your words trip the light fantastic.
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Thank you!
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He carried her like a proper puritan and she faux-slapped him! I love that. You are so inventive. The sentences just roll along.
Marg
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Thanks Marg! 🙂
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What a playfully funny story, I can almost see the words dancing.
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Thanks so much. What a lovely description. 🙂
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This made me feel like I was in Blyton’s ‘Up the Faraway Tree’ series, with all those delightful names 🙂
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Thanks. Looks like I’ll have to read that, Shailaja. 🙂
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Lovely take on the prompt, enjoyed your effort.
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Thank you for your kind words. 🙂
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🙂
Ellespeth
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Thanks Ellespeth
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Great use of names.. sometimes just those choices makes a story hilariously fun to read.
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Thanks Bjorn. 🙂
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I love your story and the names are so whimsical and lovely! An enjoyable read. You are so very clever! Nan 🙂
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Thank you Nan. You are always so kind with your comments. 🙂
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