For this exercise, I went to 3 year old (unedited) me and wrote the first words that came out.
I love puppies
They make me feel all mushy
They are beautiful and fun
and friend to everyone
Puppies make us laugh and play
make every day a better day
They miss us when we’re gone
make us feel like number one
Don’t mind if we dress them up in
nothing a pup should be seen in
Soft and warm and cuddly
sunny, jumpy and bubbly
they pick us up when we’re feeling down
Make us chase them round and round
Wag their tail with glee
Overjoyed just to be
with us. They don’t fuss
or cause mistrust
They love us unconditionally
and sometimes irrationally
forever and ever
Now what could be better!
Writing 201: Poetry Day 4: Concrete Poetry, Animal, enjambment
Many Puggles (puppy cuddles) to you ❤
How cute. I love puppies and hearts. Great job.
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Thanks so much. Me too! 🙂
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Puppies are the best! Enjoyed your poem!
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Thanks, they sure are! 😀
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beautiful heart
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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I adore your poem and love your heart “shape” ~ nice job!
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Thank you Dani! 🙂
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So cute – I want a puppy now; ok I have wanted a puppy since I could say I want a puppy but now i really want one.
I think i need to go and see my mom and get a bit of jack russell fix 🙂
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Thanks, Eva, Me too. Jack Russells are so much fun!
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Love the poem and the heart. Those puppies are adorable.
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Thanks Mags. 😀
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I so loved the heart shape that I ploughed right ahead and read the whole thing, partly up-side-down. I think you connected with the three year old in me. I read further down and found the adult version. Glad I took the fun route. ❤
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That’s so cool! I’m so glad you took the fun three-year-old way! (I write things like that on Birthday and Christmas cards, without the grown-up easy to read part.) ❤
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thats wot us puppies ar best at!!! ha ha ok bye
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They sure are 🙂
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I read this round and round on my ipad and even accidentally switched the screen off in the process! Lol! Mmmmm ……. Wonder how you did this? I’m impressed. 😄. I love puppies too!
Hope you are enjoying the rain. It’s lovely February weather now. I like warm rainy days at this time of year. Have a top day!
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Oh Dear! That’s funny! 😀 Puppies alway inspire me.
I like the cooler weather too. The floods not so much. We were lucky here though.
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