Today’s beach sunrise foretold amorous sumptuous colour, promised freedom. A rendezvous of words erupted, inside her mind, vying for attention, muffling her view. Viola shushed her inner narrator.
Her happy-mask clinched together by pillars of hope, concealed what she was, even through her phantom sleep. But even her footprints missed him.
They looked at the same moon, the same stars… though he was far from view. Time had stretched like flabby-grey elastic, exhausted, sad, waiting. She wrestled with the ache of him, longing for proximity, a tear smuggled its way out. Now they had found the exit, would the tears ever cease?
Soft piano, Clair de Lune, conspired with the sea to weave a chord of contentment she hadn’t met. His voice hovered in the wind, entwined in the spaces of the song. Wafts of his soul swept past the plateaus, over the towering rocks, ascended the darkness, before the sun’s lofty aspirations arose.
Viola chased slender threads of meaning, her hunger fierce, demanding. She’d bridled her devotion too long. Her heart heightened in cadence with the swell and the song, curling, piping, dancing, uprising, as her ears pursued one mellifluous sound. His voice.
He kissed the tears from her eyes. His feet had followed the moon. Her heart billowed with relief and a plethora of emotions she couldn’t speak. He was here, safe.
The sunrise prospered, wondrous kaleidoscopic clouds grew, indescribable, vital, beyond beautiful. The brightest sun ever seen; a mere candle, eclipsed by the hymn of love, of him. His eyes whispered gentle thoughts of a love deeper than the Earth, of naked fearless joy. He was home. She could breathe.
He reached for her hand as the sun glowed vows of blissful fusion.
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This was beautiful. There was a melodic undertone to the entire piece of writing, completely befitting Claire de Lune. I loved reading it!
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Music always brings out the deepest emotions in people, so it isn’t surprising. 🙂 I’m looking forward to reading more. Good luck, and happy writing!
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Hi there
It is with pleasure that I nominate you for the Very Inspiring Blogger Award. You can read the post about this here: http://wp.me/p4Do1g-gd.
Best, Angie K
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Being a new blogger, I ‘do’ everything. 😉 You are very welcome. :-))
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Giant Congratulations on an awesome blog, Angie ❤
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Thank you 🙂
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Thank you! Good to hear from you, hope all is well!
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Thanks so much Angie, you too 🙂
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Beautiful rendition of Claire de Lune.
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It seemed fitting that her love, so missed, was brought home by the moonlight and the beautiful song. Thanks.
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Music. Home. Him/Her. Ahhh.
Great writing, this.
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Thanks Ron. 🙂
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Very lovely!
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Thanks Karen. 🙂
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Sweet photo!
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Thanks so much Dragonstar.
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That was a beautiful piece of writing. It describes the waiting and the relief I feel for someone who has been away. I also like the photo you chose to go with your work.
Take 25 to Hollister
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Thanks Su-sieee Mac. I’m feeling the same but he’s still away. I can’t imagine what it was like before phones, for drovers, fishermen, or during the war. I’m enjoying your website, thanks for the link.
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Beautiful! And I love that piece of music 🙂
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Thanks Katie 😀 Me too!
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Very nice! Thanks so much for linking this to SoCS! 😀
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Thank you Linda!
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Really wonderful photo! Very expressive!
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Thanks so much LonettA
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A beautiful love story. The music was perfect for moon gazing 🙂
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Thanks Lauzlau
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One of my favorite piano pieces of all time, and a beautiful story to go with. It fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks so much for your kind words. Clair de Lune is one of my favourites too.
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Such beautiful writing – ‘a love deeper than the Earth’. I love that line. A wonderfully romantic piece. Thank you. 😊👏
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Thank you so much Maria. 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Pieni. 🙂
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I have to close my eyes so many times. Theres a picture in my head while reading your entry. #ww
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Thanks Merlinda. That’s what I was hoping for.
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I like your photo. Very nice of you to link 🙂
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Thanks Paula.
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Your writing is so beautiful and rich. Nicely done!
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Thank you Susan. 🙂
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A beautiful tale of love! Your words flowed like poetry, creating a powerful feeling of what it means to be in love. Excellent work! TiV
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Thanks so much. What a lovely thing to say. 🙂 Sorry my original reply didn’t get through.
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Such a moving and beautiful piece =)
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Thanks for your kind words. Sorry my original comment didn’t get through.
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I like what you created from the prompt. Beautiful story 😉
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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He was home. She could breathe.
That completely sums it up for me. Sigh
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I know how you feel.
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I wondered if that was the way my MIL and Mom felt when they too lost their loves.
I would like to think so.
Thanks for visiting my Fairy Tale piece… there are more…(I added two today) ~Jules
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Thanks Jules, I’m looking forward to reading more of your wonderful writing.
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