He waited for an hour
abreast the leaning golden tower
His affection wed to guilt
for his beloved Shelby Hilt
He couldn’t settle down
word was out across the town
She was coming home today
He couldn’t wait to play
to sing with, to spoil her
that’s just how they were
He hadn’t meant to hurt her
and then helpless, desert her
Leave her with a man she didn’t know
to mend her broken centre. Though
the accident was quick
she’d taken quite a kick…
‘Shelby has to be alright’
he bewailed, forthright
A bustle in the shadows
A shout across the meadow
He longed to be with
the one he dearly missed
At last at their meeting
choked with affection his greeting…
Not a word. I know
it’s absurd, to bestow
rich emotion, deep devotion,
and to harbour artless ardor-
favored by far- on a vintage car
What a clever ending! Brilliant piece 😀
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Thanks Mishka. 🙂
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You got me. I’m thinking heartless brute, he wants her back? I loved it.
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Thanks Meredith. 🙂
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Good one! Very clever take on the prompt.
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Thank you so much.
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I feel like this should a song!! I love it, and could just hear the music burst from it. Great job.
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Thanks Patricia. It would be interesting writing music to it.
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I was thinking great song too. Enjoyed the way you conveyed the story in so few words. Cool take on the prompt!
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Thanks.
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so good! enjoyed this much –
“Not a word. I know
it’s absurd, to bestow
rich emotion, deep devotion…”
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Thank you.
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So fun – loved the ending! Had to go back and read the whole thing over again once I found the twist 🙂
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Thanks so much. I’m glad it worked.
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Fabulous ending! Very nicely done. 🙂
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Thanks Suzanne. 🙂
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I love cars, and the Shelby is particularly special. A fitting ode!
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Thanks Silverleaf. The Shelby is a gorgeous car.
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Very clever! You had me guessing until the end. Then I had to go back and read it a second time! 🙂
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Thank you. That’s so cool! 🙂
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You don’t know what you got til it’s gone.
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That’s so true.
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Well, I did wonder about the lines “the accident was quick / she’d taken quite a kick…”
Hmm, a peculiar relationship, I thought to myself. But I still had no clue that Shelby might be a car 😉
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Thanks Blake. 🙂 I guess I gave a few cryptic clues. 🙂
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A vintage car would win me. An interesting tower.
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Thanks Gemma. Me too!
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That is some golden tower – beautiful
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Thank you Debbie. 🙂
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Wonderful photo. Thanks.
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Thank you Cee.
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Such a clever ending!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this.
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Thank you Colline. 🙂
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Love on four wheels! I love a happy ending! 🙂
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Thanks, me too, and they are gorgeous cars. 🙂
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